Ani May Queen

The first thing I actually thought when I saw that title was "Yaoi" ha, I'm so weird. If you don't know what yaoi is, just ignore me. I could also ...

Wow. I've got to tell you up front, I really enjoyed reading this. It was extremely hard to find anything to really critique! Here are the few things I spotted: ...

Intresting, sounds like a slice of life story, but with a twist. But that's just my weird mind working! Four Pronged Key

Alma, if it's a girl. Isn't that a pretty name? Frank told me it means "soul" in Spanish, I think that's beautiful - Pilis Maybe Mia, if it's a girl, ...

9/10 Ha ha, it's a dancing monkey!!

Viamire had just gotten back from her violin lessons when she noticed the tornado speeding along the campus. She blinked, a little surprised, but not much. After attending this school ...

10/10, pretty

Boyblue - Kent Angelgirl - Kia Lifesasong- Candy What, in your option, is the most important event in history?

7/10 OMG it's not a pig. The very fabric of the universe is coming undone as we speak.

10/10 It's great.

she began to prepare herself for, what she did not know yet, would be a very long day This seems to be a bit of cut and paste sentence. Just ...

Azzia reluctantly shut the yellowing with age book “Yellowing with age” seems out of order. Try just “the aged book” or “She shut the yellowing pages of the aged book” ...

Granted, but then it's all wrong. I wish my back didn't hurt!

So long as the monkey is not a baboon, I'm good with a monkey. If it is a baboon then I shall kill it.

I'll try to review most of it, but I'll do the prologue first. The beginning paragraph I like. It's got lots of good detail. I can get a nice image ...